writeshefali

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Surrendered Universe…

No Alarms
For Sun to rise

No Training
For Flowers to bloom

No Reminder
For Children to grow

No Counselling
For Planets to keep distance

No Scrutiny
For Tide to follow direction

No Control
Just Surrender to life’s flow…

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If you have no peace
Then it’s time to
Not Give Up
but
To Give In
To the flow…

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48 comments on “Surrendered Universe…

  1. boundlessblessingsblog
    November 14, 2016

    Wow so deeply written. Simply loved the thought process & the concept you created. Beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Ginene Nagel
    November 11, 2016

    How lovely. I think it is ego that gets in the way of surrendering. It takes more strength to subdue the ego than anything. But in submission, we become lighter and more free. Not an easy thing to do but there are rewards.
    Ginene

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    • writeshefali
      November 11, 2016

      True it’s d ego that comes in between n a long way to let it go….for me it’s still a momentary win n then i back to square one 😊… thanks for your input truly appreciate it 😀

      Like

  3. A Silent Spectator
    November 1, 2016

    #deep and brilliantly written!👌👌👌👍

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  4. Nisthur Anadi
    October 29, 2016

    Very very profound. You are blessed with wisdom. Am I jealous ?

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    • writeshefali
      October 31, 2016

      Haha… wisdom or not I don’t know… I just feel giving in to the flow lessens your turmoil… hence said not give up but give in right now … you are more insightful than I am … so I am sure u are pulling my leg by saying u r jealous 😊…

      Sorry for my late response was a bit tied up… Hope you had a wonderful Diwali n a Happy New Year 😊

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      • Nisthur Anadi
        October 31, 2016

        No I am not pulling your leg. Some times you don’t know how many dimensions your statement can have ?

        No I am not jealous but kidding. Happy Diwali is alright but Happy new year is bit early…

        My heart beat increased after seeing your comment.

        Hope you’re doing good…

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        • writeshefali
          October 31, 2016

          Oh I thought it’s a new year for everyone… It’s a New Year after Diwali for me today hence the wish…

          I am good nothing to worry about, thanks for the concern n have a lovely day 😊👍🏼

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          • Nisthur Anadi
            October 31, 2016

            Then wishing you back Happy new year in advance..
            Some times you want to continue conversation but remain quite in absence of agenda……

            Have beautiful time ahead…

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  5. unsaid words
    October 28, 2016

    Such an amazing message

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  6. Akhila
    October 28, 2016

    should we surrender…nope, i think

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    • writeshefali
      October 28, 2016

      Hmmm… so what should we do ???

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      • Akhila
        October 29, 2016

        walk against the flow, if the current is not in your way

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        • writeshefali
          October 31, 2016

          Hmmm… I don’t agree to what u r saying with this post….because going against the flow is not going to give me any peace it’s going to add more turmoil….. I spoke about nature which cannot be controlled similarly in life there are instances that cannot be controlled… so the best bet is go along with the flow n not give up… the flow changes always, even the rising sun has to leave at the end of the day n let the moon shine… so its all about lessening your turmoil in life… not give up but give in, till it flows in the way u want ….

          Sorry about my late response Akhila… was a bit tied up… Hope you have a wonderful Diwali n happy new year 😊

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          • Akhila
            November 1, 2016

            hmm.. may be we are having different perspectives in this case.. anyway leave it…have a great time Shef

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  7. Varsh
    October 27, 2016

    No training
    For Shefali to write

    Yet she learnt and taught a lovely life lesson. 😊😊

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    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      Kekeke… Varsh u are a darling 😘😘😘…. come to think of it, when you are trained then you are thought a way of doing things n then it kind of becomes a rule book…. untrained n u have no boundaries, even crazy 😜 becomes forgivable…hahah…

      Glad you liked the message 😍

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      • Varsh
        October 28, 2016

        Aww…you are a darling too Shefali 😘😘😘
        You are right. A trained mind gets set by boundaries and starts working within the frame it is taught to. Like…a bird flying in the air…and an aeroplane ( ok, commercial aeroplane! :-P) Is the example right?

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        • writeshefali
          October 28, 2016

          Ya i guess… like skydiving n then your parachute doesn’t work n you surrender without boundaries 😂😂😂

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  8. Prachi
    October 27, 2016

    Life would be so different if we just surrendered to life’s flow 🙂
    A nice read!

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      Yes life would be easy if only surrendering was also easy😞….a momentary stop gap arrangement is all I have achieved😉…. Glad you liked the message Prachi 😊👍

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  9. novelistbaba
    October 27, 2016

    bruised and exhausted,
    i couldn’t hold ground, anymore.
    the storm took over,
    defeated, i, look beyond myself:
    i was flying.

    we all need to give in to the flow…….excellent poetry!

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    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      I kind of liked your version of surrender than mine….hahah….
      Thanks a ton for checking the post n writing such beautiful lines 😊👍🏼

      Liked by 1 person

  10. radhikasreflection
    October 27, 2016

    No control. Just surrender to the life’s flow…… Wouldn’t we all be a happier lot if we followed this……you are surely getting better at poetry dear 👍

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    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      I guess happiness comes at a cost n this surrender is something requires a lot of letting go, which as a human is it possible 🤔… till then a momentary flowing in surrender is what I think I can do😉… Thanks Radhika, means a lot when u say that the poetry is good 😊👍

      Like

  11. fluffysteps
    October 27, 2016

    I wish no alarm was needed for me to rise though. 😛 But you conveyed a great message here. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      Haha… me too especially these cold days… but isn’t it blissful when your body clock wakes u up than that darn alarm 😂😂😂… Glad you liked the message, Thanks Dear 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  12. sreejanac
    October 27, 2016

    The idea of ‘Not to give up, but give in to the flow,’ is beautiful Shefali. ☺

    Liked by 1 person

  13. prashantt
    October 27, 2016

    Deep one..i loved the thought process & concept you relate caption with writing!!👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      Glad you liked it n was not very heavy for you🤔😉😂😂

      Liked by 1 person

      • prashantt
        October 27, 2016

        Ab bata hi deta hu as you’ve already guessed its kinda heavy for me…i read it thrice then i found a connection between quoted words & verse aur fir mujhe HR supermind ka realization hua..honestly speaking a wonderful work👏👏👌👌🙈😜

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        • writeshefali
          October 27, 2016

          😂😂😂… I knew kyuki when I showed it to Mr. Knight the response was “yeh Kya bakwass likhaa hai ???” After 2 explanations then 💡moment came… so I thought maybe for u too it could be same 😂😂

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          • prashantt
            October 27, 2016

            Haahaa…almost same hi ho gaya😛you know Men will be men😂😂
            I must say he’ll be perfect one who loves simple things…school,college,job mein itna deemag laga liya hai ab aap yaha par bhi mind excercise karaoge..haahaa

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  14. g3
    October 26, 2016

    😊😊

    Liked by 1 person

  15. valerie-the-escapist
    October 26, 2016

    Beautiful 👍👍

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Steve
    October 26, 2016

    Great flow….. Love it

    Liked by 1 person

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