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Whom do I choose…

Lately, have been thinking
Who will be my white knight

The one who tugs my heart
Or The one who stimulates my mind

The one who causes my blushes
Or The one whose seen all my crushes

The one whom I call for dates
Or The one whom I call for updates

The one who brings me roses
Or The one who makes funny poses

The one who thinks I am flawless
Or The one who knows I am monstrous

The one whose love seems zealous
Or The one whose love seems boundless

Puzzled with Mr. Right
Who is really my shining white Knight.

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109 comments on “Whom do I choose…

  1. Miss Fortitude
    October 27, 2016

    “Lately, have been thinking
    Who will be my white knight
    The one who tugs my heart
    Or The one who stimulates my mind”

    Brilliant! This is so true for some of us. Were you able to figure out the answer to your question and make a decision? I’d really like to know. Haha! ❀

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    • writeshefali
      October 27, 2016

      Hmm.. confusion when too many optionsπŸ˜‰…. I went with the stimulation of mind who later went on to tug my heart ❀️ ❀️…. hope the best one wins too in ur case …. πŸ€”πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  2. Nisthur Anadi
    October 21, 2016

    This is master piece in terms of romance and ecstatically good delightful read of yours.

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    • writeshefali
      October 21, 2016

      Hehe… one of those rare easy write-up this was…. a confusion in love for Mr. Right 😍….

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      • Nisthur Anadi
        October 21, 2016

        Hahaha… Love is great felling confusion can consider as spice…is it not ?

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        • writeshefali
          October 21, 2016

          As long as d spice doesn’t burn you…it’s good….but the phase is wonderful indeed adding the charm of finding love ❀️ ❀️️❀️️… once u find it worth d agony 😊

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          • Nisthur Anadi
            October 21, 2016

            Spice depends on taste too indeed. Enjoy journey , destination will have different taste n pleasure..

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            • writeshefali
              October 21, 2016

              Agree every pinch of salt will change the outcome of d dish…. so will ur journey….hehhe… 😎

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              • Nisthur Anadi
                October 21, 2016

                Hahaha I loved your very funny yet true answer that every pinch of salt will change the taste of the dish..you are witty too shefali
                ..

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                • writeshefali
                  October 21, 2016

                  Thank you πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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                  • Nisthur Anadi
                    October 21, 2016

                    Some times your are filled with sweetness of wisdom other time you are fun filled . It’s always great talking to you..

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 21, 2016

                      You can call me a playful soul😎… I like having fun n want others to join in too… πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

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                    • Nisthur Anadi
                      October 21, 2016

                      Yes indeed you are playful , nector of bliss oozing from each pore of your soul. Got your advise.
                      .

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 21, 2016

                      πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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                    • Nisthur Anadi
                      October 21, 2016

                      😊

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                    • Nisthur Anadi
                      October 21, 2016

                      How you get these fun loving playful ideas I wonder…

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 21, 2016

                      It’s in my genes I believe… my father has this playful side which I have seen in most adverse situations too… We laugh at our own lame jokes u see πŸ€“

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                    • Nisthur Anadi
                      October 21, 2016

                      Lol this is amazingly intresting thing.
                      Hats off … Keep this side up…this is very much needed now a days

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  3. WorldThroughMyEyes
    October 11, 2016

    Probably the knight you fall in love with? Not the perfect one, just the one.
    Just a thought.

    You beautifully penned every girl’s thoughts

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    • writeshefali
      October 11, 2016

      😊 You actually have stated a right point, the confusion clears n the criteria don’t matter when you fall in love…. Even if imperfect as per the list, yet perfect in his own way…
      Thanks for your input πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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      • WorldThroughMyEyes
        October 11, 2016

        But love is hard to find and harder to sustain.

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        • writeshefali
          October 11, 2016

          Hmmm…. Have the faith n love will find you… Sustain yes that’s hard, but nothing in life is ever a cake walk, so is love …so some hardships, some hurt, some fights n some forgiveness will go a long way 😊

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  4. Bikramjit
    October 10, 2016

    That is a lot of things to look for in one human being.. if they have all this they will be GOD πŸ™‚

    but hey heres wishing you all the best and I am sure there is this shining knight waiting to be seen by you …

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    • writeshefali
      October 10, 2016

      Hahha… Thats true not all can be found in one… N hence the confusion πŸ˜‰… But at one point of time we want it all n then one by one filters keep getting dropped …hehhe…

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  5. ʞɐ
    October 10, 2016

    Are people still searching for knights in shining armour?
    Now, isn’t that difficult in this era of Tailored suits and Mercedes?

    Anyhow, nicely penned poem.
    And I hope you find that Mr. Who-Completes-You, soon. Or have you found him already? πŸ€”

    P.S. For most the Mr. Right or the Mr. Knight is the one their parents choose. #ArrangedMarriages, just saying.

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    • writeshefali
      October 10, 2016

      The Knights are still there but the attire has changed in the modern era one as you described… Didn’t u see the movie ‘OMG’… Where Akshay Kumar playing Lord Krishna had the modern attire… that way ;)….
      Even in the arranged marriage scenario… Most of the time parents do give options in guys don’t they??? And the girl can choose between those options… N there she can make her list of choice… you see 😊

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      • ʞɐ
        October 10, 2016

        TouchΓ©. πŸ‘πŸ» Looks like you’ve figured everything out.

        I think you’ve already found your white knight.

        But you see, it is the parents preferences and yes, the choice would be the girls but it won’t satisfy all the criteria, would it? πŸ€”

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        • writeshefali
          October 10, 2016

          Hahha… True not all criterias are met N hence d confusion…. But at the start we have 100s of them don’t we?… N then one by one the filters keep dropping, in the end if we havent found the one matching n are really desperate to get married or fall in love, then all criterias fly off in thin air πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          • ʞɐ
            October 10, 2016

            Haha.
            All criteria fly off into thin air. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
            But, then it would be a compromise rather than a choice. A compromise of a lifetime. 😐

            So, what about you? How many criteria did he meet? 😜

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            • writeshefali
              October 10, 2016

              To compromise or not to both are choices you make for whatever reasons…
              N I am a very demanding person, so obviously all the criteria’s have been met πŸ€”πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  6. my valiant soul
    October 8, 2016

    Amazingly written once again!

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  7. prashantt
    October 8, 2016

    WoW! Shefali..you’re so good on penning poetries,this is beautiful & copacetic but i guess you are very demanding to your white knight or Mr RightπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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    • writeshefali
      October 8, 2016

      Really ? Am I? … Coming from you high compliment for me, thanks 😊…. N if i demand 100% then at least 50% will get fulfilled, strategy man understand πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      • prashantt
        October 8, 2016

        Arre i consider myself better on travel writings & storyteller..poetry is never be my forte and now a days you’re banged on with beautiful verses thats true.
        Haahaa..omg! I hope someone somewhere will look on this conversation of strategic girl ready to bargain on her demands..πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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  8. Puneet
    October 8, 2016

    Exceptionally written.

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  9. Steve
    October 8, 2016

    Good one

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  10. Varsh
    October 8, 2016

    Seriously darling…ek insaan mein ye sab kaise milega…kisiki ye baat acchi…kisiki wo baat achhi… 😝😝😝
    I’m sorry…but why should only guys get to ogle at different girls at once. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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    • writeshefali
      October 8, 2016

      Yaa why should only guys say…. Kis Kis ko dekhu… Kis Kis se pyaar karu… We should have options too… Choices are limited but still why can’t we find all of the qualities in one πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      • Varsh
        October 8, 2016

        That’s what! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
        October 8, 2016

        They never look for all qualities in one girl, that’s why they see many. πŸ˜›

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        • writeshefali
          October 8, 2016

          πŸ€”πŸ€” there’s a point there somewhere πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
            October 8, 2016

            Here’s that point you were searching for “.” πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
      October 8, 2016

      Who said only guys get to see many girls at a time? I don’t agree πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      • Varsh
        October 8, 2016

        Exactly. Even I don’t agree. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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        • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
          October 8, 2016

          πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          • Varsh
            October 8, 2016

            Great minds think alike. 😎😎😎

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            • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
              October 8, 2016

              I am one of the great minds, who is the other?πŸ€”πŸ€” Heights of being proud about oneself πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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              • Varsh
                October 8, 2016

                Platforms pehen liye kya aakhir?? Height artificially badh gayi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                  October 8, 2016

                  Na.. I don’t have one. πŸ˜› Meri height se mein Khush hu πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ I am 5’11

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                  • Varsh
                    October 8, 2016

                    Oh! Let me stand on a stool and wear platforms…I will most definitely tower over you then. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Thank you for believing that I am 5’11” πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ minus 6″ and that is me 😎

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      Now come on…why would I think yoy

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Think what? πŸ€”πŸ€”

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      Galti se mistake ho gaya πŸ˜¬πŸ˜’

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Galti se kabhi kabhi acha bhi ban jata hai.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Ye dialogue bhi shayad waise hi bana hoga. 😁😁😁

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      Send got pressed by mistake in the earlier comment πŸ˜‘
                      I meant to say why would I think you will lie about it? I haven’t seen or measured you! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Haha.. but girls of that height is rare, atleast among Indians isn’t it. I was the tallest in my class during engineering😱😱 even in office, I was taller than most of the guys πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
                      Wp should come up with send back button so that even if we press send accidentally, we can get it back πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      Rare…definitely. So you were like the Deepika Padukone heightwise. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
                      That’s what…this error is very irritating. 😑😑

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Haha yes. She speaks Konkani at home and so do I πŸ˜› but she’s dating Ranveer Singh and I am not πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ He’s cute, isn’t he? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Cute???? Ewwwww I don’t like him at all!! πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ˜ΆπŸ˜ΆπŸ˜ΆπŸ˜ΆπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I love his attitude..the way he carries himself…confident and positive…πŸ˜†

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Pls… I ll puke πŸ˜› I hate his attitude. He’s very playful… Prankster types

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                    • Varsh
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I’m far away. You can puke if you want. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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              • writeshefali
                October 8, 2016

                πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  11. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
    October 8, 2016

    First comment πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Did you watch knight and day before writing this poem? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    I think I should recite this often and see if I get a knight or a prince πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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    • writeshefali
      October 8, 2016

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… Please do… Print it out n hang it on your wall…. Then recite it like a guru mantra, you surely will find your Mr. Right, Knight n Prince 😜

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      • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
        October 8, 2016

        Yeah, but problem is I am not searching for one πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ not interested so many Mantra to shoo them away shef Baba? πŸ™

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        • writeshefali
          October 8, 2016

          Sorry! I have no mantra to shoo love n guys away… I am in love with the idea of love… So always want everyone to fall in love including you sweetie 😍😘😘❀️❀️

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          • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
            October 8, 2016

            I can fall in the ditch if you prefer πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ but never in love. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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            • writeshefali
              October 8, 2016

              Aaah… Mark your words… D day u fall in love I m going to come n show this comment section to you… Wait n watch 😜😈😊

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              • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                October 8, 2016

                Yeah, I will wait. That will never happen. Mark my words, this comment, this blog, Mark even your phone πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  12. radhikasreflection
    October 8, 2016

    Haha πŸ€“. But seriously when I read the poem it seemed that thoughts decided to dress up with words and come on to the paper! Enjoyed it😊

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  13. radhikasreflection
    October 8, 2016

    Such a beautiful flow of thoughts Shefali!

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    • writeshefali
      October 8, 2016

      When I was writing this one, it actually flowed through me… One of the easiest piece for me… Otherwise I have to rack my brains πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…Thanks Radhika you seem to see through my writings πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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  14. imaginattionworks
    June 17, 2016

    You write so gracefully, omg. Keep doing you.

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  15. thanisamanyan
    June 10, 2016

    Nice Poem. Do write of Mr.wrongs. would love to see it.

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    • writeshefali
      June 10, 2016

      Ok, your wish Is my command ;)… Though you might have to wait, poetry is not my forte.. I am in my learning phase, it takes time for me to compose one. But I will… Thanks for liking my post πŸ™‚

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    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
      October 8, 2016

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Mr. Wrongs ….

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      • writeshefali
        October 8, 2016

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ what do I say to this… Mr. Wrongs are unlimited edition…

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        • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
          October 8, 2016

          It’s like saying you meet the wrong ones before you finally meet the right one. But sometimes, you just keep meeting only the wrong ones because the right ones are already taken πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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          • writeshefali
            October 8, 2016

            πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ so true… right ones have limited edition…. why are good ones always taken?? Is it because grass is always greeneer or they are running behind Ms. Worng when Ms. Right is right here πŸ€”πŸ˜‡

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            • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
              October 8, 2016

              I dunno. I always the good looking ones either married or about to be, or not interested in girls. 😳😳
              May be I should change my taste πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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              • writeshefali
                October 8, 2016

                WHAT??? Change to taste to girls … Is it?? I am running away from u sorry not available πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                  October 8, 2016

                  No… Start looking for less handsome ones.. actually finding someone good looking or not is all in the perspective. You might find George Clooney bad, but I find him good looking. It was just an example, in case you like him.

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                  • writeshefali
                    October 8, 2016

                    hmmm…. Less handsome is better re… See when u n he r walking ppl will say, hey! Look! that guy is so lucky to be beside such a beauty …. n not the other way around πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Both are same. Girl is pretty they say she could found a better looking one and vice versa if guy is handsome. Beauty is skin deep. After few years, we all will have grey hair and wrinkles on our face. And looks doesn’t matter. Someone might look good but is a very bad as a person. Why am I giving you advice??πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 8, 2016

                      Hahah… I am surprised that you are even giving advice let alone to me πŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Hmm.. advice giving bhoot is inside me I guess πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      I should be giving this advice to myself isn’t it πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 8, 2016

                      Well you probably indirectly are through your subconscious to yourself through me…πŸ€”πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      May be… You are my medium you mean πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      October 8, 2016

                      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Maybe πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      October 8, 2016

                      Solid liquid or gas?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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