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Autumn in Air…



Autumn in the air again
Colouring leaves with
Yellow, red n gold
Memories caressing once again

Can you hear my fluttering heart
Are you even listening to it right now
When I walk this lonely road
When I see the dawn of fall of those around

Colours go away one after another
Fallen dead leaves is all that I will find
Entering a heart of ice cold
Trying hard to forget n fall out of it all

Can you hear my confession once again
When I look back I still find you behind me
It’s easier to remember than put it all behind me
When it’s our autumn ablaze that still warms my crystal nights…


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45 comments on “Autumn in Air…

  1. Nisthur Anadi
    October 21, 2016

    More than Beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  2. fluffysteps
    October 14, 2016

    Very vivid and sweet poem. πŸ˜‰

    Liked by 1 person

  3. meetijii
    October 7, 2016

    Happy October dear plz follow back

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  4. fluffysteps
    September 29, 2016

    What lovely, touching memories. Beautifully written.

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  5. shreyans
    September 29, 2016

    wnonderfully described, you captured the true emotion, loved it..
    shreyans

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  6. Akhila
    September 29, 2016

    as long as the autumns are there, love will be there..may be reappearing after another summer

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    • writeshefali
      September 29, 2016

      Only if there is a hint of hope of reappearance…but most of the time it’s always d end…I guess either u go on till memories last or a new love comes along to bring a new autumn 😊

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  7. prashantt
    September 28, 2016

    Kya baat hai you’re taking over my genre…lagta hai HR ko koi pareshan nahi kar raha aajkalπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    This is beautifully written verse like a love song accompanied with seasons blessing…πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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    • writeshefali
      September 28, 2016

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thought of trying some love lines…I really worked hard on this, how do you all do it yaar… Hats offπŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½… I m glad you think it’s good 😊

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      • prashantt
        September 28, 2016

        See a lot of hard work & dedication required plus love k side effects hue ho toh spark zyaada aata hai writing mein.
        You’ve written very fresh & lively that’s the difference.

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        • writeshefali
          September 28, 2016

          I feel d depth of emotion of the separation still missing in this piece…Love ke saare effects experience kiya hai re… Par words r not coming out πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… Neway I will keep trying this once in a while to give u stiff competition πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  8. elliemegam
    September 28, 2016

    Hi. I nominated you for the versatile blogger cause I really think you deserve it. Here’s the link to my post. Check it out and do the needful. Best wishes.. https://iscribbledblog.wordpress.com/2016/09/28/the-versatile-blogger-award/

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    • writeshefali
      September 28, 2016

      You are too kind, but I hope u don’t mind if I don’t do this award, as I have already done it n I really don’t have many interesting facts to talk about again… But thanks for thinking of me 😊

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  9. Varsh
    September 28, 2016

    Wow…what a poem! It is a love stoey

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    • writeshefali
      September 28, 2016

      Btw u asking or making a statement if this is a love story??hahha… Thanks…u liked it…really?? love poems is the hardest for me…

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      • Varsh
        September 28, 2016

        I started typing and it got sent when I wasn’t even done thinking what to type. 😁
        Yes, I really liked it. It is like a love story…as in..like sometimes lovers go away for some time but know that they’ll be together soon…that sort. ❀

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        • writeshefali
          September 28, 2016

          Hehe.. Yup that happens to me too accidental send click…I am glad u liked it, was not very confident with this one….though this piece talks more on permanent separation for whatever reason n u are forced to forget n move on…but then u r still in love n can’t, so don’t force n let those memories keep u going… 😊

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          • Varsh
            September 29, 2016

            Hmmm…separation in any form is cruel. If it is inevitable, the best one can do is hold on to those fond memories and let them give you purpose to go on. 😊😊

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  10. Steve
    September 28, 2016

    Good one…… Sounds like love is in the air…..

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    • writeshefali
      September 28, 2016

      The poem is more like memories of love in the air, but yes the feeling of love is always in the air… Thanks for the appreciation Steve 😊

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  11. radhikasreflection
    September 28, 2016

    Your poem brings in the fresh n cool whiff of the autumn breeze. Lovely Shefali πŸ™‚

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    • writeshefali
      September 28, 2016

      The credit goes to these autumn colours helping in delivering this poem I guess πŸ˜‰…Thanks a ton Radhika 😊

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      • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
        September 28, 2016

        By post or email ? (Delivering this poem) πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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        • writeshefali
          September 28, 2016

          via emotions darling emotions…accha lag ki nahi Woh bata???, my love poem 😍😍

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          • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
            September 28, 2016

            Like toh Kiya hai darling.😘😘
            Emotions se bhara poems by princess of … It auto completes to Neptune so I am going with it. Princess of Neptune.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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            • writeshefali
              September 28, 2016

              πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…I will go with princess of anything, so Neptune is good….btw Neptune is associated with intuition and spiritual enlightenment…. so it kind of fits me doesnt it πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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              • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                September 28, 2016

                Really? Looks like I choose the right name for you😍😍😍
                Are you ok with princess of elephants, since you like elephants? You will be named haati ki Rani. 🐘🐘🐘

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                • writeshefali
                  September 28, 2016

                  πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…I will go with the first choice which u intuitively chose… I aint choosy u see, I go with the flow… so Princes of Neptune it is… Thanks 😜

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                  • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                    September 28, 2016

                    If Neptune is supposed to signify intuition and I choose Neptune intuitively, then I wonder who the real princess of Neptune is.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      September 28, 2016

                      Ok then let’s share it… U be the Princess n I will be the Queen 😊

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      September 28, 2016

                      Yay yay. Princess means young, queen us more like aunty you know. So let’s both be princesses 😘😘

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                    • writeshefali
                      September 28, 2016

                      Aah! My darling… Such a sweetheart 😘😘😘😘…looks like our love is blossoming through this poem πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
                      September 28, 2016

                      Why is everybody talking about love these days? πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Looks like love is a new component that makes up the atmosphereπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                    • writeshefali
                      September 28, 2016

                      U n ur Sheldon…Uff!…Kya hoga tera…Love Kar le pagle aur zindagi ke kuch haseen pal jee le… Learn from other bloggers… They made me write a love poem, which is totally an uncomfortable zone for meπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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