writeshefali

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As I…

 As I look at the rising sun

As I breathe in the windy air

As I hear the chirpy birds sing

As I taste the freshly brewed coffee

As I touch the grass wet with dew

As I feel love wrap me around

As I realise all my senses come alive

Looking at the sky

I close my eyes n smile…

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57 comments on “As I…

  1. Springstart@life : Kamakhya
    August 22, 2016

    Beautiful poem! Thank you for the visit n follow my blog! Nice meeting you! Just followed you , Blessings!

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      August 22, 2016

      Thank you for your visit n compliment, the feeling of meeting you is mutual.. Will keep in touch 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Hemangini
    August 2, 2016

    Reading this I want tomorrow morning to be just like this… wonderful poem

    Liked by 1 person

  3. CommonSenseTom
    August 1, 2016

    Your sky’s the limit poetry and imagery is rejuvenating. Both convey a wealth of your fine wisdom. You address the basic truths… our refuge from a chaotic world… our path to smiles and inner peace all revolve around our reveling in life’s simple pleasures.

    Liked by 2 people

  4. shreyans
    August 1, 2016

    The calmness spread around me as I read this..amazing..
    Shreyans

    Liked by 2 people

    • writeshefali
      August 1, 2016

      I am so glad it did… I have often wondered if I could pass on through my writing d emotions I feel… I m happy this piece is able to convey that…thanks a ton Shreyans 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  5. fluffysteps
    August 1, 2016

    This was so calming to read! 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

    • writeshefali
      August 1, 2016

      I had a calm feeling when I wrote this… N I am so happy that it connected so well with you 🙂

      Like

  6. sreejanac
    August 1, 2016

    Lovely Shefali.

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      August 1, 2016

      I will take this as high praise from a woman of beautiful words 🙂 Thanks Sreejana (I hope I wrote your name right).. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • sreejanac
        August 2, 2016

        Thanks, ya my name is correctly spelt.☺

        Liked by 1 person

  7. Nisthur Anadi
    August 1, 2016

    Its beautiful way to smile.

    Liked by 2 people

    • writeshefali
      August 1, 2016

      Ya there are some mornings which are just serene n u can’t help but smile… Usually it’s a holiday though..heheh.. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • Nisthur Anadi
        August 1, 2016

        Yeah so true you made me smile with such a honest, cute and witty answer.

        No doubt holidays morning brings smiles and off course not blues.

        Love the idea , concept and poem even more after knowing the inspiration behind it.

        Kudos to you.

        No doubt makes you different.

        Liked by 1 person

        • writeshefali
          August 1, 2016

          Ok I m in d clouds with so much praise… Thank you so much for your kind words… N I m also glad that I was a reason for one of your smiles 🙂 Have a wonderful week ahead 🙂

          Liked by 1 person

          • Nisthur Anadi
            August 1, 2016

            Yes off course sincere praise , brings smile on face and we feel happiness with in.

            Appreciation and recognition makes this blogging world beautiful.

            Liked by 1 person

            • writeshefali
              August 1, 2016

              That’s so true… I m new in this blogging world when I started I really had no expectations… But I was in for a surprise this place is so beautiful… Filled with wonderful bloggers who bring so many unique n creative ideas… I have just fallen in love with this world (if that is possible that is lol)

              Liked by 1 person

  8. pins & ashes
    July 31, 2016

    yes.. and breathe in the new day 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

    • writeshefali
      July 31, 2016

      Thanks darling… Do you even sleep dear ?.. I m sure it’s late in India.. Or did I get ur place wrong??

      Liked by 1 person

      • pins & ashes
        July 31, 2016

        I slept the whole day today.. so up!

        Liked by 1 person

        • writeshefali
          July 31, 2016

          Oh ok… I just got worried.. I have seen u responding at odd hours so just asked… Now I sound like an Aunty….hehehe.. sorry 🙂

          Liked by 1 person

          • pins & ashes
            July 31, 2016

            hahaaha! sometimes there are more interesting things than sleep 🙂

            Liked by 1 person

            • writeshefali
              July 31, 2016

              Here my mind kind of wandered to something else 🤔🤔😉…continue with ur inetersting thing I dnt want to come in between 😀

              Liked by 1 person

              • pins & ashes
                July 31, 2016

                nothing much, I was planning to read something till I felt sleepy, plus it has been raining here all day long..

                Liked by 1 person

                • writeshefali
                  July 31, 2016

                  Ya I know… Mom was complaining Sunday just went by because of d rains

                  Liked by 1 person

                  • pins & ashes
                    July 31, 2016

                    was so dark the entire day! 11 clock felt like 6am..

                    Liked by 1 person

                    • writeshefali
                      July 31, 2016

                      I can relate… UK has such erratic weather.. Usually I like d rains but it kind of becomes depressing if it continues to rain for days n then I crave for some sun rays

                      Liked by 1 person

                    • pins & ashes
                      July 31, 2016

                      exactly the same, so I wish the sun too wakes up in the morning, as I wake up like what you wrote.. and it will be blissful..

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                    • writeshefali
                      July 31, 2016

                      Amen to that… So let d sun rise n u have a blissful morning like I did 🙂

                      Like

                    • pins & ashes
                      July 31, 2016

                      yes.. 🙂 fingers crossed! the rains should stop, wonder how many railroads are blocked!

                      Liked by 1 person

                    • writeshefali
                      July 31, 2016

                      Many I m sure … N d trains weren’t they blocked… When I use to work there I use to secretly wish for d trains to stop n roads block … So I could take a leave 😉

                      Liked by 1 person

                    • pins & ashes
                      July 31, 2016

                      tomorrow will know ..let’s see!

                      Liked by 1 person

                    • writeshefali
                      July 31, 2016

                      👍🏼😊

                      Like

  9. kiranmag
    July 31, 2016

    A very nice way to welcome the day.

    Liked by 2 people

  10. sharmaankit09
    July 31, 2016

    Beauty 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  11. prashantt
    July 31, 2016

    Beautiful lines!! Have a great day ahead 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • writeshefali
      July 31, 2016

      You too… My start was good 🙂 the words kind of flowed for the first time today so me happy :)… Have a great day n week 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • prashantt
        July 31, 2016

        That’s so great naa…lol!don’t worry after sometime i’ll call you chalta firta writer.It is really beautiful.Keep writing & stay happy☺

        Liked by 1 person

        • writeshefali
          July 31, 2016

          Lol… Ya it’s great 😉… wish you d same …Stay happy… Happy me, happy u… happy everyone… I think I m going to get diabetic with so much sweetness n happiness…..hehhehe

          Liked by 1 person

  12. radhikasreflection
    July 31, 2016

    Beautiful 👌

    Liked by 1 person

  13. emotionsoflife2016
    July 31, 2016

    As do i

    Liked by 2 people

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